PROJECT 4 PANORAMIC PAINTING

Greyscale version of photos

Photo

First go at this section

Second go at this one

 
Way to go here, foreground grass too bright, hedges and plants behind cage need adjusted, drawing and colour of cage ditto.  Brightest bits are yellow protectors and sky, cage posts need to be darker, plus blueish wash for netting on top.  Light kept changing, also cannot really see because poor light falling on painting.  Usual sploshy start followed by closer look.
Sky OK, field at back more green but subdued, different colours and tones in cage need looking at.  Composition OK, sense of distance OK. 

 Usual panic with this one, took me two sessions, pic is too bright.  

Image 3

Image 4

Image 5

 This one problematic  Subject difficult partly because of the tree. Very conventional composition.  Remains unresolved, but I will hope to work it out.  Still unresolved, basically too conventional, hope sometime to resolve....  A few days later image 5, not perfect BAM but stronger.
 
But it led me to revise painting from previous project. Still a bit to do on this, but I enjoyed the freedom and won't do too much more on it.  Here it is previously (middle below).  .  Ughh.